Tuesday, April 24, 2007

Unspoken

An incomplete word
A wandering thought
A beautiful song
Comforting lot

A ringing bell
A familiar pain
The silent scream
The music of rain

Unadulterated love
A caring hand
Once again I seek
The magic band

I learnt to forgive
A smiling pain
Dreaming eyes
Hope remains

12 comments:

Anonymous said...

Nice One!!!

Unknown said...

Awesome work.....channelised emotions thru brilliant creativity

Unknown said...

Awesome work.....channelised emotions thru brilliant creativity

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Anonymous said...

Well written.
Is there something I dont know?

Hitashi said...

Oh Man!!
My roomie is a blogger!! i did not know abt the hidden poet.
Is there something i need to know??
Awesome..nice start...keep blogging.. :D :D ;D

Hitashi said...

Very profound..nicely expressed...
but..is there anything i am supposed to know???
good start...!! :D

desigirl said...

For those who have asked " There is nothing that you dont know!!! "There is no hidden message:)

Sana said...

nice nice...keep 'em coming :)

Asmya said...

Simple and sleek. Good stuff

Unknown said...

very nice!
probably word 'wand' fits better than 'band' in the third stanza!

Anonymous said...

In the mornin you go gunnin
For the man who stole your water
And you fire till he is done in
But they catch you at the border
And the mourners are all singin
As they drag you by your feet
But the hangman isnt hangin
And they put you on the street.